I like the color contrast here and the overall lo for the same reason the left side apealed to me. I would still suggest a thin cream mat for the photo strip, maybe even a cream block to write the journaling in. I love those cute little pink/red brads. Although I like the contrast between the two pages, now I'm not so sure about the flow as they're placed side by side. It seems like the photos from the left run into the wall when you look to the right. It would help if the layered pp could be seen through the bottom photo on this page. The title also needs to flow together. @ the could be placed going across the line where the 2nd & 3rd photos on this page meet. One last idea, I can see the journaling going across the scallop strips on both pages instead of in a block.
I love this lo! Love the photo placement and the layering, the journaling, the scalloped borders, the brads-everything is great! I have only one suggestion -on this page-pull the pps under the photos a little bit more to the left, so the pps on both pages are kid of the position the same.Great fun lo!
You really captured the feeling of a fun beach day on these 2 pages! This BG collection is so pretty. Dig the fabulous coordinating brads. Love the fact that you use the brown background from the other side for this side's scalloped part (& vice versa w/ this side's tan background & the other side's scallops), it unifies the 2 sides nicely. I also like Denitza's suggestion about pull out the pp a bit more on this side so it's more like the pp on the other. Great job - looks like a carefree & fun day was enjoyed by all!
This is my two-pager of the fun trip we took to the beach in July. I based this LO off of the new Ali Edwards sketch that's on pencillines.com. http://www.pencillines.com/2007/10/sketch-53.html is the link. I rotated it for the first page. The journaling reads: Thomas, Tristin, Makenzie, Mersadez, Mom, Brandon, and I had so much fun at the beach playing in the sand & water, catching sand crabs (112 to be exact!), and eating Grotto's Pizza. What a fun day! July 2007.
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