how you lie

SHCG: We meet again! Marsha, I, too, love this movie. I love the colors, the quote, the doodles (I REALLY love the doodles), the hearts, the movie picture, and even the "aside". It all comes together nicely! I do want you to show me a little more of YOU in this. Perhaps another aside (smaller), that says, "I do, too." I'd also like to see some journaling about why you like this movie. I was thinking with a small "handwritten" font around the border of the layout that tells of some feeling you get watching, or a favorite scene. Other than that, I love this and Frankly, Marsha.... I think you did a damn fine job. :D

June 23, 2008

fun LO!

June 01, 2008

SHCG: just fun fun fun!

May 30, 2008

SHCG: How fun this is!!!! I love how the background color matches the color of his shirt and the red just jumps out!

May 29, 2008

SHCG: Love that movie! My favorite part of this is how you added the line about Rhett at the bottom- so true! :) The thing that is jumping out at me the most is that the "Frankly my dear" line doesn't seem to fit too well in the square. Great lo!

May 28, 2008

SHCG: See my post on your updated layout!

May 28, 2008

SHCG - Cool that you have a LO to respond to one of our BWCs, could you please edit your post in the LO thread so you name WHICH BWC you're responding to, so everyone has it for a reference (note, I already knew cuz it was my BWC, LOL!)? OK... this is a neat-o page - love the vibrant colors, lively designs, the "movie" font in the red square & how that "Oh Rhett" part is in that clear-looking font, like a spoken aside or a secret afterthought to the viewer! That being said, I wish everything was gathered in the center more. I'd want the left margin as wide as the right margin (you'll find out that I unexpectedly have become margin-conscious since joining SHCG, it surprises even me...). Likewise, I would move the "Oh Rhett" quote so it's grouped closer to the "Frankly..." red box. I just feel like w/ all those cool, floating elements, you need to anchor them closer to the center. Finally, I would like to see a journaling strip that at least says this is your favorite movie; if you want to be more elaborate, follow Brenda's suggestion & explain a little about why it is. But I want something that explains why you scrapped this in the 1st place (cuz it's your fave!). Superfun, Marsha, TFS!

May 27, 2008

SHCG: I love your take on the challange, and that has always been a fave movie quote. I would sugest changing the background color to something a bit more vibrent, or maybe textured, and the background of the title so it pops more.

May 26, 2008

SHCG: You go on with your bad self--uploading your monthly minimum contributions within days of joining our cg! I had to check out the challenge thread to help me get a better idea of what I could offer in terms of critiques. I love all the doodles, and the red really conveys passion. For this reason, I'd go with a different type of green for your bg, to go with the intensity you're trying to create here. If you do that, you might decide to change the coloring on all the text, as well, so that they also get the attention they are due. Would you consider adding some journaling that explains why this is your fave movie?

May 26, 2008

SHCG: Love the colors! I also really like your take on the challenge. I would consider adding a border around the edges to make the page look more "finished."

May 26, 2008

great job! love the colors!

May 16, 2008

I love this movie! Great design and photo!

May 16, 2008

Oh excellent!! I love the quotations and all the swirls! Well done!

May 16, 2008

OH! I was soooooo immediately grabbed by this LO!! I have this poster on my office wall (and my mouse pad AND the face of the watch I'm wearing today!) so I am very drawn to it....and I LOVE the way you ahve used it on this page! Excellent!