Having fun @ the beach (right side)

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Great LO. I love that you rotated the sketch. Again colours are great and I really like that you journalled a bit about it too!

October 24, 2007

A-HA, the date! Perfect! I love the orientation of the pictures and once again the layering is totally cool! Fabby!

October 23, 2007

Oh it's a two=pager .. I like how it switches and I see the date now, sorry.

October 19, 2007

I love both pages separately but together I agree with twinscrapbee I not sure if the horizontal page "connects" enough with the vertical one.

October 17, 2007

I like the color contrast here and the overall lo for the same reason the left side apealed to me. I would still suggest a thin cream mat for the photo strip, maybe even a cream block to write the journaling in. I love those cute little pink/red brads. Although I like the contrast between the two pages, now I'm not so sure about the flow as they're placed side by side. It seems like the photos from the left run into the wall when you look to the right. It would help if the layered pp could be seen through the bottom photo on this page. The title also needs to flow together. @ the could be placed going across the line where the 2nd & 3rd photos on this page meet. One last idea, I can see the journaling going across the scallop strips on both pages instead of in a block.

October 17, 2007

I love this lo! Love the photo placement and the layering, the journaling, the scalloped borders, the brads-everything is great! I have only one suggestion -on this page-pull the pps under the photos a little bit more to the left, so the pps on both pages are kid of the position the same.Great fun lo!

October 14, 2007

Such a fun LO! You really brought the feeling of the fun at the beach to this lo, Love the photos and the entire LO!

October 14, 2007

You really captured the feeling of a fun beach day on these 2 pages! This BG collection is so pretty. Dig the fabulous coordinating brads. Love the fact that you use the brown background from the other side for this side's scalloped part (& vice versa w/ this side's tan background & the other side's scallops), it unifies the 2 sides nicely. I also like Denitza's suggestion about pull out the pp a bit more on this side so it's more like the pp on the other. Great job - looks like a carefree & fun day was enjoyed by all!