an everyday moment

I love the mix of the pp - perfect combo to go with K's sweater. I like the journaling too (only because I have been doing that alot lately so I must justify!) I like Louisa's idea about the tag, ad Pam's idea about the flowers. I would add the name of the book too!

October 08, 2007

awesome LO...

October 07, 2007

I love the kraft paper and the colors along with your notebook pp. I think I would like to see more info in the journaling, like the name of the book, etc. You can always put the journaling on a hidden tag and slide it underneath the pink paper, just as is. Maybe add three flowers towards the bottom of the blue pp. LOVE the picture. She is too cute!

October 07, 2007

I love that picture, and I think I like the journaling on the notebook paper. I would move the pink pp vertically and to the right of the photo, so that moment goes over the pink pp, then maybe move the flowers horizontally where the blue pp and white pp intersect to the left of the picture. I hope that makes sense!

October 07, 2007

CS: I would put those pink flowers below the photo instead of to the left. Then perhaps put journaling strips to the bottom left of the photo, slightly overlapping. I think it'd be a nice addition to your design. And I agree that the journaling could specify the book she brought--good detail!

October 07, 2007

I actually like the journaling where it is. Could you try doodling around it or adding flowers to frame it?

October 07, 2007

CUTE!

October 07, 2007

Love it! You are very daring putting it all on one side but that works so well.

October 07, 2007

This is cute! I like where you placed your journaling. But there is not enough info in your journaling. Also the pink pp placement is bugging me a little. My eye gets drawn to that first. But then again I don't do tilted paper that well. I really like your title a lot! Great job!

October 06, 2007

It's really cute! I love the whole thing, but I do agree that you should include what book she brought & why she choose that book. You could journal on the LHS & if you add extra information it'll take up more room.

October 06, 2007

*CS* This is a lovely LO - as usual. The only suggestion I can come up with is to write the journaling in a column on the LHS, maybe mirroring the zigzag of the pps. Love the holey scalloped edge.

October 06, 2007

*CS* I like the journaling. But I am curious what was the book she took? Did she get it read in class? Did she say anything about it?

October 06, 2007

*CS* J, I like the journaling, and I love the kraft background. If I were to add any more journaling, I would probably go for the hidden journaling behind the papers on the right. The other option I think is to do a journaling spot on the left, and balance with some embellies. Sorry I am not seeing much else to pick on here!

October 06, 2007

Cheers